Ancient Feud: Shadows Of The Past

Okay so this story is still in the beginning phase but I have no qualms that it's going to be big. The opening chapter is catchy and everything else is. The characters I have seen so far are shrouded in mystery and they really make me want more. I don't review much but this story has a really good start.

This review is occurring in the early stages, but I still find that this story has drawn my interest.

The grammar seems to be on point and doesn't detract from the story at all.

The personalities of the individuals we've met are starting to be developed, and it's exciting to see how they will shape up over time!

The world building is starting to take form and isn't happening in the way of 'infodumps' which is great news for everyone!

The first chapter leaves us wondering and questioning, which is great!

I hope you give this book a try, it's definitely worth a read!

Good job author,  you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style,  i loved the mc and your descriptions.
The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters   keep up the good work

really good book so far definitely deserves way more attention and love them it gets. wouldn't be surprised if this novel eventually blows up.

count me in, in this journey Joda

Ok, so the synopsis itself is eye-catching and attracted me to the story. The grammar is fine and well written, I await how the story will turn out to be!!!

An early review,even for me but this book deserves it. An intense action packed start, followed by more action that don't feel forced. Like you legit know why a fight must break out in a chapter and the reasons are sensible too. Don't even get me started on the fight scenes themselves. This guy can describe the best fight scenes ever. I've read my vampire system and other great books and I know how some of these books don't satisfy the reader's thirst for more action. Well,this guy solves that problem easily and makes you feel like your spectating the fight in person. Just amazing. This book is definitely gonna be big. I can tell.