What do i even say aside, BEAUTIFUL WORK!!!
I'm so in love with the twins. Their strength makes me wanna hit the gym and their actions are so lifelike. Jada is an agrieved child in an adult skin hellbent on revenge and Joda Is the calm, wise brother but a monster on the inside.
If I ever want a coach for my own writing, I seriously hitting this author up. I call dibs.
A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.
This book drops you into the action and quickly give the story of a prince who must bring the world to peace (but not before dying repeatedly). The writing is decent and although is only has a few chapters at present, it has a lot of promise!
The story starts with lots of action. The fight scenes are described in great detail. The writing style is very enjoyable to read. The main character's actions seem logical and his feelings and emotions are well conveyed.
The reader finds out more about where the novel takes place along with the main character as the story unfolds. This is a very interesting book to read!
Wow. I like how you started this novel! Amazing work! I'd rarely read an ML book, but the details you gave in the starting scene was so vivid. Even I'm not good at vivid scenes. I couldn't stop reading. Even though it was a fighting scene, I liked it very much. Very good author. I'd continue to read the novel. Please update!
Ohh!Man this novel is full of action scenes
In first chapter when I was reading there was sentence where it was written something like he was searching for someone who is special for him
I thought that that person was girl but that special person was his brother.. Lol!
Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4
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I'm so in love with the twins. Their strength makes me wanna hit the gym and their actions are so lifelike. Jada is an agrieved child in an adult skin hellbent on revenge and Joda Is the calm, wise brother but a monster on the inside.
If I ever want a coach for my own writing, I seriously hitting this author up. I call dibs.
The reader finds out more about where the novel takes place along with the main character as the story unfolds. This is a very interesting book to read!
In first chapter when I was reading there was sentence where it was written something like he was searching for someone who is special for him
I thought that that person was girl but that special person was his brother.. Lol!