This novel is developing into something possibly great. The character interactions are realistic and lovely, descriptions are vivid but can be a bit much at times and lately the update stability has been good. I only wish for the story to develop like this and the updates to continue happening.
Very well written novel. In terms of writing quality, it is the cream of the crop on this platform. Nicely crafted characters and world background. The only thing working against it is the irregular updates and cliché tropes.
I love the story so far. I don't read much on this platform but this work is one whose updates I look forward to daily. Continue to update regularly and develop the story as you are doing and it will be a great work!
The book is really well written, and I keep on guessing what happens. The only flaw would be how long I have to wait for updates. Other than that, it has really good detail, and is extremely enjoyable to read. It also has many unexpected turns throughout the book, and that is what makes it a great book.
Untill now the story is heading in a good way (25 chps in), this book has its own uniqueness. It has some cliches but they are in no way undesirable. There are no noticeable grammatical errors and the fluidness of the story although not exceptional it is still decent. All in all a novel with lots of potential
The novel's on fire 🔥
wow I'm on chapter 108 and I have to say this author what a great development after losing to once Arthur's character development is simply so remarkable.
The story has become so much more interesting.
Truly author keep up the good work and please don't drop this novel.
I'm really enjoying it and I'm sure other readers to.
Thanks for the novel and keep up the good work.👍
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wow I'm on chapter 108 and I have to say this author what a great development after losing to once Arthur's character development is simply so remarkable.
The story has become so much more interesting.
Truly author keep up the good work and please don't drop this novel.
I'm really enjoying it and I'm sure other readers to.
Thanks for the novel and keep up the good work.👍
I would love any feedback you guys can give as this is my first real original novel. Also, feel free to ask any questions about the story here!