An Author's Adventure

You know, what made I'm in Hollywood great is the inclusion of real life people. We get to see the mc interact with them, change their whole fate and rise above the big names.This has 0 punch in it because all names are foreign to us, they have almost no impact and we can't even know how they look and compare their personalities because they're just names here, nothing but empty names. We can't even visualize them because the descriptions are bare minimum.What im trying to say is you're good at telling stories and the prolonged paragraphs of workings of things but you're bad at making people visualize it.

The extremely short chapters are totally unnecessary

I understand you focus on different aspect to boost your book, I will like to share alot of benefits of the book promotion aspect with you, it help increase visibility, drive sales and build your platform

You see, I am 13 years old, and  i singlely write and edit my book, thereby i can't promise a daily release.But i can guarantee 3 chapters in a week.I give my book 5 stars rating to motivate myself to keep pushing.

This story is fantastic! It really triggers me to read more. I'm hooked from the start and can't wait to see what happens next..............