An ancestral echo

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

Although It’s good, if you release a few more chapters, it might become interesting enough for a lot of people to read. There is one major problem with this: The POV’s, you said there from chapter 6th onward, that there would only be first person view, but the next two chapters are literally 3rd person again😂But if you fix this and do all the chapters in first person, it’ll be great.I feel like the writting start’s to get a lot better at chapter 10, so keep reading till that. But it got potential, I’ll say that.Good read👍. Author just don’t fuck it up.