An Aimless War (Greatest Thief 2)

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This "you know" writing style is not good. The story lacks of excitement cause the spoiler in the early chapters ruin it all, it was as if the MC is destined to stand at the peak no matter what tragedy befall the MC.

The book is mediocre in my opinion. There aren’t much scene that gets your blood going. Xpxpxpxpxp pxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxp ppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp pxpxppxx

I really want to question people who gives this Novel so high 🌟if you want to save your Time and Brain Cell then don't read it.clinch on next LVL

Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!

A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities. It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else. Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!

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Has this novel been dropped? I would like to know so as to not waste my power votes on an unfinished novel.