Aman Test

Needs serious editing

I didn't know GooseFive could write this bad. At chapter 50: The MC isn't likable. He even acknowledges that he has bad character and is not charitable. He sometimes reflects on his past as a spoiled young master. Rong Tao, who is trying to court his ex-wife, does seem to be more likable and sincere than the MC. This is a terrible thing. At some point we might be wishing Rong Tao got the cheat system and was the MC. Many important topics like the Fairy Planet and cultivation are poorly explained. I noticed this series has no harem tag. What is the point then? He'll become good friends with Zhen Shiyu? Who would read such garbage.By chapter 100 the scenes containing Di Jiu are boring, he just bickers with an ally. He's always an unwelcome, negative presence to anyone he encounters. I'm more interested in the scenes containing Yu Jue.

What?

Wow. I totally love this book, especially with it being on audio. I can do tasks while enjoying Lyon(smile).

Amazing ...

I love it so much