i really like this novel, it has new ideas, the grammar is alot better than in other novels, it has just a great all around feeling to it. Keep it up, im looking forward to new chapters :)
so for those who read this does mc cultivate again or is his cultivation path severed for good?.i want to read it but i dont want an mc who ccant cultivate ever..............................................
Hello and an honest review from me. There are some minor mistakes I found like the supposed to be one paragraphs sentences were separated into a new one which makes the construct of the paragraphs a bit sloppy although your writing is neat with low grammar mistakes so keep up the good work, author👍🏻
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- "So did I"- said Maz Kanata and Ackbar could imagine the wide grin in her face- "It is a delightful surprise... how come you did not tell me anything Leia... I would have been able to motivate my forces better with that information."
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