i hope for the best, every new historical novel is something to cheer, maybe, one day there will be a si into a alexander's soldier in the campaign, good luck author!
The story grabs attention quickly; it’s super well-organized and easy to read, without getting caught up in unnecessary details. The descriptions are clear, which keeps the flow going smoothly—perfect if you like a narrative that gets straight to the point.As a tip, I’d suggest adding a bit more emotion to the characters so readers can connect better with what they’re feeling and thinking; it’d make things feel more personal. One more thing: try breaking up some of the longer paragraphs to keep the reading light and easy. With those tweaks, the story and characters will definitely hit closer to home.Hope it helps!
ok 5 chap and im hooked... doesn't have a system like level up or any task just a wealth of information storage& analysis that the mc can access, promising plot so far we'll see how it goes. anyway recommend to try 👍👍👍
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