This novel is in the top 5 of the novels that I have ever written.I even read it myself (mostly for editing but that is not the point).Jokes aside, give it a try (〃￣︶￣)人(￣︶￣〃)
Wait you want to feel the taste of despair?????? What man are you a masochist or something will thus have a tragic ending or NTR or the harem will die, dude, I don't know about you but most people don't want to feel " the taste of despair " not to be rude or something but you should look at the meaning of despair it means "losing all hope" and I don't think anyone wants that maybe you meant to say sadness as it's a part of life but if this novel has tragic despair-inducing story then sorry not my cup of tea
Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
Well can't say a lot since it has only a few charapter now, so my review probably isn't very accurate. However from what I've seen so far there could have some better word choices and the writing is a little ******* (not that I'm one to say, my English is also ****). It has promissing story, if the author does well, the chapters are little short but overall it's pretty good.
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