This book is a hidden gem. The plot, pacing, characters are all rich. Their desires are showcased with all the emotions from the good and bad. This novel is very well written. I need more!
in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.
The story is comfortable to read, but there are a fair amount of grammar problems. We get a little snippet of most fight scenes and then the conclusion. I'd say the biggest issue is how every enemy is a total pushover. Someone shouldn't be able to give three full powered slashs before their higher leveled opponent could even react. Nearly every fight scene yet has such issues.
The story is pretty interesting so far, but I'm still waiting for the scene in the synopsis to occur. Everything I've read so far just feels like build up. The synopsis is clearly a future event, but it seems like the main plot of this story won't start until after the main character dies. I'm undecided on whether or not to keep reading this.
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