All Tooned Up|Mickey Mouse x Reader Oneshot Book

Keep the good work upWaiting for the updateI kind of want the main F character has more audacity and hostility toward the M character because it is said that she is engaged and loved her fiancée

I truly admire how the author has crafted the setting of Dan Vu Academy—it’s elegant, prestigious, yet shrouded in mystery. The main characters, especially Minh Hoang and Thanh Khai, are depicted in a way that makes them incredibly captivating. The contrast between Minh Hoang’s carefree and adorable nature and Thanh Khai’s cold yet deeply emotional personality adds layers of intrigue and emotional depth to the story.That being said, I have a few humble suggestions that might enhance the story even further:t1.tPacing & Engagement: Some parts of the story progress at a slower pace. If the author could add more tension, dramatic twists, or gripping moments, it would make the plot even more compelling.t2.tSide Character Development: There are several side characters with great potential. If they had more presence or played a more significant role in the storyline, it would add richness and depth to the narrative.t3.tUnexpected Twists & Suspense: Given the elements of mystery and power dynamics, introducing more surprising plot twists or intense turning points could make the story even more thrilling.Overall, this novel holds immense potential. I’m genuinely excited for the upcoming chapters and believe that the story will only get more captivating from here! Wishing the author continued success and hoping more readers will fall in love with this amazing work~