Loving this one. Author characterizes really well with his informal first person approach. I was immediatly impressed by his ability to write, which exceeds many of the authors on this website by far. If you are a fan of romance, check this book out! You wont regret it. <3
The only thing bad I can say is that its going premium but luckily right now its free for a limited amount of time it pains me because I was going to wait I just read the whole thing at one go after stoping around 100 chapters but it seems that I will need to start rereading now but if I decide not to you know where I'm going... I don't understand why its going premium but I hope its a good reason because the majority of people stop reading when it becomes premium out of nowhere which saddens me a lot because not only am I one of those people but less will learn of this beautiful story.
Discovering this novel when it was only about 13 chapters was like finding hidden gems. I haven't read a good novel like this in a long time.Looking at the previous reviews, you will know that world-building is the best thing about this novel. VERY INTERESTING World building, unique and enjoyable to follow, makes you want to know more about that world. Probably the best on this platform, in my opinion. Actually, the terms used are still quite mainstream terms, such as dungeons, orc monsters, churches that govern society, and kingdom themes, just like other novels, but HECK, There is something different about this novel from the others, somehow I feel a very strong medieval atmosphere when reading this like almost the same as our medieval world but with magic in the social. I know the author has done some research to create this from reading this.The plot is very well written, my expectations were low, but the author gave his best in the plot. I even cried in some parts (I'm the type of person who does not cry when reading books). The emotion in this story is amazing. Character development is great!!! And everything made sense to me. The relationships between the characters are amazing. Most importantly, this novel has illustrations that make us understand each character better.Great world building, a good plot, and good characters, and there is something different from other novels in this pf. CONS:grammar issue (minor). The author once said that English is not his first language, and so do I. Although I'm not perfect in grammar, I can tell that some of the author's punctuation and storytelling timing are often not good. But it's still in the acceptable stage for me. It's still an enjoyable read. It's just that, for people who really care (or strict!) about grammar, it's better not to read this, I don't really like it when people give low ratings just because of grammar (I know it is important but this wn is still have good grammar)If this author had a good English editor and improved the writing, this novel might be the best on the platform. Despite the flaws, I still give it full stars because I love this wn so much. Currently, in chapter 45, The complexity of the dungeon, the mysterious girl who makes people suicide, the anti govern, the council, the prince, and the church! The story hooked me.
This story has a fresh and unique story plot. It is really interesting. Keep it up author. I will support you on this and follow this story. I am looking forward how the little kid's life will change after the discovery.
When three days had passed, Ying and Yang gathered with their parents in front of the Portal of Trials at the Celestial Palace. The portal was huge and changed its colour constantly. One second it was blue and in another second it was purple, causing the young Gods to be in awe.
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