I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential!I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened
This novel doesnt deserve most of its praise. The characters are kiddie pool type shallow and follow tropes like no tomorrow. The pace is disgusting after the first main arcs, it starts going from action to action, then goes from entire battles being skipped to skipping conquering entire worlds. There are numerous plotholes and inconsistencies everywhere in the story. That said, it is a fun read for the first 600-700 chapters. Then, things just keep repeating over and over. Bad guy vs mc, mc wins, finds out bigger bad guy, gets stronger, fights bigger bad guy and wins, repeat. The first 700 chapters had additives like new concepts and creative ideas. But into the 800s, everything is just renamed from old concepts.
It's a fun read, is not taking itself to serious but isn't to comical. Mc is not annoyingly dumb or anything so that's a big plus. I like the setup of the whole world as well is quite interesting.The progressionspeed also feels nice and makes sense since no one would be just jumping into fights day 1 just to die. The reason the mc progresses is also sensable.Concluding: the author may not be shakesspear when it comes to writing skills but he's also not an illiterate kindergartener like so many others. Until now there are may not be many things that make this novel standout from others, but due to its consistent quality and senseable story progression its a good read.Currently my favorite novel, I hope the author comesback to realise that we all enjoy the book.Also offering free cheer up service. If people rant just hit me up I'll compliment u and insult em online
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