Alchemist Startover

Idk if I trust someone with negative karma I wonder what you said that made em all made

I've read 22 chapters and if I'm going to comment accordingly, it's a really weak and incomplete story.The novel lacked depth and felt like I was reading a 2D story.The background stories of the characters are very weak and the emotions are very lacking.That's all I can say for sure over the course of 22 episodes. I couldn't read any more.The thing I've been paying attention to most recently in novels is to feel the characters very sincerely, but this novel is really lacking in that regard.I think anyone who is objective can understand that the shortcomings I mentioned are not an exaggeration, for at least 22 episodes.

Great book! Can’t wait to find out how he learns she is a protector!