It´s an really interesting story, and has a high potential, but the writer still needs much more practise. The scenen changes are too quick and comes almost unannounced. Most of the time I am thinking, "What is now going on?" only to find out that there happened a scene change. The characters are partly interesting, but to plain and especially the MC is a bit unsteady in his behavouir. First he wants not to be used, then he goes with the flow just because of something. What´s the most unnerving ist the too quick development. Parts aren´t really good explained and not as exciting as they could be. Especially i would wish that the parts in them something gets explanied to other characters, like where they explain that he got that invitation in chapter 40, would a bit more elaborate. The last thing is the grammar, there are a lot places where there should be comma´s and so on. In the end it is really good material for an good story, but it got bad realised..
The story is meh the plot is weird and the mc gets betrayed by someone that hired him and the evil person basically does the I’m gonna explain my evil plan to you and the mc goes full retard and thinks maybe he didn’t mean to attack me
All it is action decent if you want that but I just don't like when a author puts false tags smh... I mean its crazy how some author just throw random tags on a book I don't get it.
I've just finished reading it, and it's a pretty good story. I've always found 'trap' characters to be pretty fun to read, but this has a good plot, unlike most of these types of stories. All the characters are likable and quirky, and I found myself laughing with every chapter. Overall, this is a fantastic piece of fiction. I hope other authors can take inspiration from this piece of work, as it's one of the few I can respect.
Bring it back please!!! This is a good story, it already has a manhua “All hail the sect leader” and it seens really good, so can you guys please translate the novel ?
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