Against The Ancients: Starting With Divine Ranked Bloodline!

I only read until chp. 40 so i cant say how its afterwards but its quiet good, nice written and good development but there are also plot holes, the most glaring is how his identity was found out which makes no sense at all.How do you want to make a background check of an In-game character, whoes data are guarded by an high tech AI and the officials dont give out information + the hunted one gives no clues out about his identity... that is one big glaring plot hole.

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I can handle normal poor english but this is almost at the level of an MTL.  The author clearly is uninterested in establishing his characters or his world as he skips over major events (discovering the MC time travels he is over it and knows exactly what to do instantly, the CEO of a company gives a random stranger an 11million dollar gaming machine for no discernable reason, and so on).  If the author learns to use an editor and slows down enough try to tell a story with even slightly realistic characters this might be great.  Not willing to waste more time than I already have to see if they ever do though.

This is a great novel qnd i like it. Author can you put a international tournament in this novel because that will be sick. Just like King Of Avatar Novel they have a tournament like a eSports. I put my attention on this one if you keep uploading a new chapter. And i hope you put my request 😄😄😄👍👊

Currently up to 90 chapters.  So far the story is boring. If you read the 1st 30 chapters then it pretty much the same the whole way. So far no cultivation. All just making and selling pills and getting stronger slowly

Your writing style is exceptional. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. The pacing is spot-on, allowing the story to unfold naturally and engagingly. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal.

"Sorry, may kinausap lang. Tara na."