interesting but nationalism npc opinion and hierarchism... would probably spoil ..............................................................................
Dialogue and scene progressions are honestly quite terrible. Wish fulfillment fantasy is whatever, interesting premise, but very poorly executed. author needs to do more reading to improve their writing quality.
I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.
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Nice novel. The story beginning is quite interesting. Mother dying on son's arm isn't that rare but it's emotional. Not only that the revenge plot going makes ur blood pumping and u want the xu family get extinct. Anyway, writing skill is good but dialogue is the best. Anyway, keep updating the chapter. And read this novel, it is worth it.
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