A fairly solid novel. While this novel almost completely consists of already existing common tropes, it's still somewhat interesting and fairly well thought out and executed (so far at least). The power system seems respectable, it's like a simplified version of Warlock of the Magus World's power system although there are some shaky bits right now.One example of this is the lack of elaboration as to why there's no magic in the Knight Kingdom when it's so ridiculously easy and convenient even if you have the worst talent.With a bit of time (less than half a year for someone with the worst talent, much, much less if you have decent or good talent) and no resources apart from the magic textbook itself, anyone could get a more superhuman version of a photographic memory easily. The MC literally memorises a page of a very complicated book a second. I'll give this novel the benefit of the doubt and expect it to explain the these seemingly glaring issues.Otherwise though, this is pretty good. Worldbuilding is alright, characters don't seem too bad (this is a CN novel after all) and the quality of writing itself is decent as well.This is no Warlock of the Magus World but it's decent enough so far. At the very least, the protagonist of this novel is far more likeable than the insufferable protagonist from WOTMW. 4/5
Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers. Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming. Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on. To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.
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Don’t need to say much things. just read it and decide yourselves. If you are not into mmorpg or video games or or or not even playing any games you can still find this funny but can’t understand much. Anyway. Good piece
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