This story is direct, concise, and focused. The writer writes every sentence with a purpose. These are usually strong elements of writing, and most stories fail in these areas, but not in this case. This story is like pure alcohol, it does it's job so well there's no room for flavor.
I'm early in the story, so things may change later on, but in the beginning the main character never really has time to leave an impression. He does things, and things happen, but no particular attention is given to him as a character. Because of this, I lost interest in him.
Read up to ch47: The MC is Naive with Hero Complex who fights unprepared and without foresight. The enemies and bandits are dumb as they don't kill and clean up potential revenge plots. Students from other academies are naive and ignorant unbecoming of a world where strength rules. Maybe their trainers don't teach them how the world works (Spoiler: Imagine sending your prized students to their death by not teaching them common sense. ) We are brought to a world where the strong rules yet dissemination of life preservation knowledge is lacking in refinement
U ain't the only one that's sure. His adventures alone to me are much more thrilling and his fights were amazing but I also like when he teams up with void cause they're the best duo
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I'm early in the story, so things may change later on, but in the beginning the main character never really has time to leave an impression. He does things, and things happen, but no particular attention is given to him as a character. Because of this, I lost interest in him.
I laughed alot and also enjoyed an amazing read.
In Void's tone: I swear on all things shiny, that this book is awesome.
Klaus: Read this book or I use my ultimate nutcracker technique on you!
Reynolds: I agree with Klaus. Do as he says or elemental warrior would get involved.
Alice: Wanna spar? I win and you give this book a trial.
Grey: "smile" My friends are the best. Do as they say or I go into the fusion state on you
I still remember the MC always running tho can't forget about that... Shi was tragic.
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