Hi guys, the image you are seeing is Elementals Apex Mode of our protagonist. I will upload these type pictures in the novel. So please check comments after u read each chapter. Please give me your review for the novel development and to reach this novel to more.
I am just going to say, what you need to improve. First of all, remove the stars from the word, it will not make the word bold, it makes the writing gibberish.
Second you need to adjust the word length of a chapter 1500-2000.
Third, the story is good, but you need to change the MC name. Or in the future, many people will troll you.
Because the name you are using, it needs to be overpowered.
Read only few chapters so far, gotta say I'm intrigued by this, it seems like it's going to be a very thrilling story! the writing is beautiful and extra point for the good grammar only a little criticism is that introducing to many characters at the beginning could confuse other readers, but overall this is off to a good start.
Well this is a very good story, l haven't gone deeper but l am intrigued by the plot and the journey of the story, but l think u should like make less characters, wat l mean is if u pump too much info about the names of characters readers will easily forget and it would just confuse us like the guardians it will take quite some time to know all of their names and l think u should have brought them in slowly for a deeper impact, but its good you have a deep understanding of your novel and would love it if u published more
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Second you need to adjust the word length of a chapter 1500-2000.
Third, the story is good, but you need to change the MC name. Or in the future, many people will troll you.
Because the name you are using, it needs to be overpowered.