I said I would write a review after chapter 10 I think....... anyhowSo far the quality of the story is on par with the first theme I feel the author is trying to say, according to the title, it is very pride crushing for the Mc in some sense.I haven't seen many flaws in the writing, but I wasn't looking for them so their not noticeable. Same goes with the Stability of the updates though it's still early on, the updates are good.The world background isn't something I can say much about since there isn't really any development yet in this part aside from the very very basics.The character designs? Well so far the two main ones seem to be a comedy gig, but I do hope they develop more, more characters with more personality around the Mc to give it a good flow, but as for now it's okay since it's early on.This being said.... I am not good at English, thus my pick on the Writing Quality and flaws will be low, too me as long as it reads smoothly I am fine with it. This story though always gets a laugh at the misfortune the mc goes through. I will update my Review after chapter 20 if some of the qualities of the story change. I would recommend giving it a read.
Ibreally likebthis novel.Tbh the amount of breastmilk the mc is getting is kinda ridiculous. But i love the mc so it's kinda okay. Finally a novel where not betrayed pro player reincarnates to play game with his outstanding martial arts and in game knowledge. But an old man who we dont know anything about. I mean seriously. How can he fight so well?
this novel already has more than 300 chp. but the translation stoped for some reason nd it was droped at chp 314.This is a really good nove. the mc is really smart and bold. I was waiting for it to get picked up again. I hope webnovel picks this one. Really looking forward to reading chp after 314
it has a clinching beginning ... it dampers down as the chapters move forward... needs a new catch to pull ya back in a few times... but overall I love the book
Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...
I read a bit ahead so i can tell that this is a great story and it gets even better and crazier, despite everything it's beginning is a little tame compared to later on, and as someone who read a lot of pancakes works i can tell she came a long way and improved a lot so this as one of her latest works stands out as quite solid.
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