It's got good main characters, but I think it suffers too much from the intentional "evil world" design.What I mean is that everyone everywhere are just greedy monsters who strive for power and kill millions of others for shits and giggles.Also most if not all characters somewhat relevant to the story all build their power in some way by using randoms as food for their cultivation.This creates a problem in my opinion since the "MC faction" can't really have greedy power hungry mindless villains as friends, but instead needs to find "unique" people or simply mind-control subordinates.This in turn creates a problem where everyone is mindless and the story predictable except for when the main crew does something smart.Another problem I have is the use of ridiculously excessive numbers such as billions, trillions etc. They are numbers too big for a human mind to even understand the implications of. It's common to use in Xianxia for some reason, but I find it annoying to read as the implication of "billion" becomes a "trivial" thing to the story, making it seem not special whatsoever. Using 10 thousand instead would be a number one could picture in their head and still seem very impressive."Slaughtering a trillion people in an instant" > ...Uhh okay?"Slaughtering a city of 10 thousand people in just a few hours" > You pretty much see the bloodbath taking place.The story isn't bad though, and DPs writing quality is good, as it was in his other works.
Writing Quality: Good writing quality that is rare on this app. Could be better with more realistic/mature dialogue, but I guess that is a personal preference since some people are into characters who act like ten year olds so still five stars. Updating Stabibility: Good.Story Development: Interesting plot. Bad world building that throws you in without proper build up. Character Design: Horrible characters. Attempts to make a cold main character, does this extremely poorly. Main reason I dropped this. Would be better with a shounen tag and a more generic shounen personality as author’s style seems tailored to shounen. World Background: Interesting, needs better buildupOverall: Interesting plot, poor execution. Recommend making a shounen protagonist for future novels. Would recommend to people interested in shounen type novels, just not my personal taste.
Honestly, this is not the type of book I would generally be reading (I usually read fantasy plus romance that easy to read). Nonetheless, this book started out really well and has a great description. I can't really say anything about grammar, spelling, typos, and anything related as it was also my great issue. But I think this book is really great for those who liked the genre. Keep writing, author. Good luck ;)
One of them was pinned down by a girl with a scarf. The girl put her hand on his face, then the man fell unconscious. The other two were clutching their stomaches in pain. In front of them, another girl with a traditional eastern clothing pulled out a talisman with foreign letters on it. She muttered a spell which caused the men on the floor got hit by a lightning which came from the talisman.
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