It’s an interesting plot and the beginning has a really good start. I quite like the whole idea of the MC being a soldier. So far, it’s amazing and I can’t wait to see how it works out.
Auto nope because the ml puts 0 thought into who to protect he clearly isnt much of a soldier if he cant even plan and do backround checks on who he plans to protect then pick someone who deserves it
The writing and plot development leaves much to be desired, having a open background lets you add characters and elements into the story anywhere you want to but it's a bad habit to make.
You need to foreshadow and plan more how things can go, stacking events and descriptors one on top of the other does not a story make, that's just bad writing.
Even as a comedy you tend to lean towards the more serious side whenever a harsh topic comes up. It's too careless to just change the tone, you have to break the tense atmosphere properly before running with a joke.
At times, you corral your character's personality into single sentence or single word statements. If this was purely comedy it's fine but when you mix drama you need to avoid pigeon-holing your characters to stereotypes. This makes them less a person and more like a set piece used to work the scene.
You rely too much on light novel tropes who also rely too much on anime tropes. If you're good it works, but like most light novel authors you don't quite realize certain gags work better visually than on text.
You should read more wholesome literary comedies or watch more British humor to balance your slapstick with punny wit.
Amazing novel. Easily better than most translated novels of this genre. It's pretty realistic as well, there are no villains calling MC a "thrash" at every corner and stuff like that. Romance is great, characters are great, both female and male lead. One advice I would give to the author is to actually make this novel short so he could actually finish it. There is no need for 3000 chapters like some translated novels have.
Amazing!! In fact if I do say so myself this Novel is better than the previous one!(Overpowering System)
This doesn't mean I don't like his previous one though, i'm just saying it's better.
Some may say that is sounds exactly like Beauty and the Bodyguard, but trust me it is NOT.
Its may be similar but it different at the same time.
Also for those who have a family Member in the Army or in some Military position, thid Novel's MC is a total Military Brat, so highly relatable!
~ Over all another Amazing Story by Lynerparel!
I guess it's a fine novel. That remind me a lot Full Metal Panic that I watched years ago when i was still a kiddo. Some kind of comedy/slice of life/misunderstang/romance. Even though, i didn't read a lot (40 chapters) i think i mostly saw everything than can be shown and in the genre that seem quite easy to guess what will happen/will happen not. A good read to relieve you from some boredom.
But I will quickly end my read on it for a single big reason. It's premium since chapter 85, they're more than 200+ chapters. That's way too early, i barely got 20-25 gemstone per day (if i don't forget to check). Not adding the fact, it's not some kind of addictive novel, you read it, you can creep a smile time to time but that's all. That's also why the novel is falling in the ranking again and again the more chapters is going on. I can't check if the quality is going down but i don't think so. Think that's simply because it's a premium original with a lot of chapters and the story isn't addictive enough to throw all your wealth into it. They will be some fun joke and funny moments but you can found these moments in others stuffs without having to sacrifice your read on your favorites novels who are more unique.
Wishing still good luck to the author, i think that if he's writing that novel just for his own pleasure. That's perfect. If he's writing it to get a living on it, that's going to be a bit more difficult.
Gawd and here I was looking for the perfect blend of action and romance
Where we're u all my life
This novel is phenomenal
Lurving every bit of it
Lmao
Hope u keep the updates stable along with the quality of the chapters I've read soo far
Best of luck op =P
=2
"Adopted Soldier" is a powerful and poignant narrative that delves into the complexities of identity, loyalty, and the human spirit. The story revolves around a protagonist who, having been adopted into a new family, discovers their true heritage as a soldier from a different background. As the character grapples with this revelation, they must confront not only their own sense of belonging but also the societal expectations and the impact it has on their relationships.
This novel explores the universal themes of love, forgiveness, and the resilience of the human connection. It challenges readers to question the nature of family, the importance of acceptance, and the strength found in embracing one's roots. Through the protagonist's journey, we witness the transformative power of self-discovery and the ability to forge new bonds, even in the face of adversity.
"Adopted Soldier" invites us to empathize with the struggles of those caught between two worlds, reminding us that our shared humanity transcends boundaries and labels. It is a heart-wrenching yet uplifting tale that leaves readers pondering the intricate tapestry of life and the profound ways in which our past shapes our present. Ultimately, it serves as a testament to the capacity of the human spirit to adapt, heal, and find meaning, even in the most unexpected circumstances.
"Adopted Soldier" is a compelling narrative that tugs at the heartstrings. The protagonist's journey from a stranger's son to a self-discovering hero resonates deeply. The author masterfully weaves a tapestry of emotions, as the protagonist grapples with loyalty, identity, and the true meaning of family. The characters are vividly drawn, leaving readers invested in their growth. A thought-provoking read that challenges societal norms and leaves a lasting impact.
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The writing and plot development leaves much to be desired, having a open background lets you add characters and elements into the story anywhere you want to but it's a bad habit to make.
You need to foreshadow and plan more how things can go, stacking events and descriptors one on top of the other does not a story make, that's just bad writing.
Even as a comedy you tend to lean towards the more serious side whenever a harsh topic comes up. It's too careless to just change the tone, you have to break the tense atmosphere properly before running with a joke.
At times, you corral your character's personality into single sentence or single word statements. If this was purely comedy it's fine but when you mix drama you need to avoid pigeon-holing your characters to stereotypes. This makes them less a person and more like a set piece used to work the scene.
You rely too much on light novel tropes who also rely too much on anime tropes. If you're good it works, but like most light novel authors you don't quite realize certain gags work better visually than on text.
You should read more wholesome literary comedies or watch more British humor to balance your slapstick with punny wit.
This doesn't mean I don't like his previous one though, i'm just saying it's better.
Some may say that is sounds exactly like Beauty and the Bodyguard, but trust me it is NOT.
Its may be similar but it different at the same time.
Also for those who have a family Member in the Army or in some Military position, thid Novel's MC is a total Military Brat, so highly relatable!
~ Over all another Amazing Story by Lynerparel!
But I will quickly end my read on it for a single big reason. It's premium since chapter 85, they're more than 200+ chapters. That's way too early, i barely got 20-25 gemstone per day (if i don't forget to check). Not adding the fact, it's not some kind of addictive novel, you read it, you can creep a smile time to time but that's all. That's also why the novel is falling in the ranking again and again the more chapters is going on. I can't check if the quality is going down but i don't think so. Think that's simply because it's a premium original with a lot of chapters and the story isn't addictive enough to throw all your wealth into it. They will be some fun joke and funny moments but you can found these moments in others stuffs without having to sacrifice your read on your favorites novels who are more unique.
Wishing still good luck to the author, i think that if he's writing that novel just for his own pleasure. That's perfect. If he's writing it to get a living on it, that's going to be a bit more difficult.
Where we're u all my life
This novel is phenomenal
Lurving every bit of it
Lmao
Hope u keep the updates stable along with the quality of the chapters I've read soo far
Best of luck op =P
=2
This novel explores the universal themes of love, forgiveness, and the resilience of the human connection. It challenges readers to question the nature of family, the importance of acceptance, and the strength found in embracing one's roots. Through the protagonist's journey, we witness the transformative power of self-discovery and the ability to forge new bonds, even in the face of adversity.
"Adopted Soldier" invites us to empathize with the struggles of those caught between two worlds, reminding us that our shared humanity transcends boundaries and labels. It is a heart-wrenching yet uplifting tale that leaves readers pondering the intricate tapestry of life and the profound ways in which our past shapes our present. Ultimately, it serves as a testament to the capacity of the human spirit to adapt, heal, and find meaning, even in the most unexpected circumstances.
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