Her coffee, doe eyes? There is something wrong with this. I'm like what? Coffee? Or Coffee doe like eyes? You need to get this edited. Also, I saw the most reviews are from Nigeria as well as the setting is definitely Nigeria as said so in the few chapters I read, not entire, can't relate with it.
I kinda interested to read more, the story line is good, but some parts feels a bit weird for me, I think you can do better in character development, I won't say anything about grammar thing because it's my weak point toolol
So far the premise is interesting and the story is funny, I enjoy the mc’s personality and if you’re looking for a fun read about reincarnation I’d recommend it
Great novel, Really love the character development the writing is great, just the world background is lacking, but I really do love the fresh character it's great, and even amazing. Love to see more chapters.
Perty good. His other book was good to. Author dropped both of em tho. Ig it's still worth checking out tho. Even though this one cuts off right as it was getting good.
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