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  1. Zoe_Tagboto
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    Stopped reading at around chapter 270. I do understand an mc orders and goes against authority but how is it that the mc and his friends pretty much rule the world after defeating the leaders. Maybe it happens in fantasy but leaving the fate of the world in the hands of a bunch of youngsters is a total killjoy. I'm not reading anymore of this.
  1. PeacefulRemedy
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    I came here after reading chp 31, genuine question.. why are make the MC have a crush on jane? U don't even give the reader a hint, i like their chemistry as a friend tho.. i can say that the romance is really bad that's it, i don't know about the later story coz i'll drop this
  1. IBOR
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    I don't want to spoil too much, but after a few chapters I have a grasp on what the style is like, and while the first chapter has a kind of zoom in effect with suitably much background about the world, the dreamy, ethereal feeling of the character decipted just floating through the world comes to an end and the story kicks in. I won't say much about the plot. It is not my place - this is not the kind of book I normally read. But the style is immaculate, and the flow gets you reading, the world is vivid and the feeling of moving is certainly there. I have nothing to complain about.
  1. preciouspeter
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    right away I will say this story has decent world-building and ok story development.  but that's it. first of all, reading the first 15 or so chapters is like rubbing sandpaper on your eyes and is the visual equivalent of nails on a chalkboard. excruciatingly slow start, repeating segments that don't add anything, and a general lack of plot development outside of typical world building combines with machine translation quality English to create a unique abomination. to top it off it's maddening that a story can have such decent world-building while making a character so empty I question if the story even needs them. I will attempt to read the remaining chapters while it's free, but genuinely don't think I can. this novel isn't the worst thing ( that goes to a novel that suddenly became one-piece fanfic at chapter 85ish) but I cannot stress enough how mediocre at best this is.
  1. Dummybeing
    Dummybeing rated it
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    Overall the novel is mediocre, and okay for killing time. I'm currently 100 chapters into this novel. Though the MC is a reincarnated cultivator it has very little influence on the story. Other than some fighting techniques, old pills, and very little old fashion cultivating the MC doesn't use his past knowledge at all. So in that regard this story is more of a sci-fi novel, than a cultivation sci-fi fusion novel. During the story you learn almost nothing about his past life, other than he was a subpar cultivator. I found it somewhat difficult to connect with the MC, as most of his relationships are not really well fleshed out. Also, the MC's personality is somewhat unstable. Sometimes the MC acts like a young adult, others a wise cultivator, and other times like a child. It's like the MC is going through a constant identity crisis. I'm also confused at how a former cultivator who has wiped out countless lives and seen the worst of humanity, is stunned by some of the stuff he witnesses. My biggest gripe with the MC is that he's really just a cog in the machine, and doesn't have any real goals. Even if he was the climb to the Pinnacle of the armed forces, he'd still just be a cog, and nothing special. The MC is currently going on missions, but they are quick and he is efficient...so efficient there is no thrill in reading the mission chapters. The writing quality starts off pretty bad, but get better in the later chapters.

    Overall not a bad novel, but nothing revolutionary here.
  1. lordaurelian
    lordaurelian rated it
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    This is a story with potential. I like the plot, I like the characters, and I like the world background. However, there is one thing that really leaves much to be desired: the writing quality. The words themselves are ok. They are not being spelled wrong. It's the awkward sentence structure you can frequently find, the missing words and the words not fitting the context that really lower the quality of this story. The sad thing is that these problems could be prevented easily. The author needs to do some editing, or get a beta to do it. That way this story could really be up there.
  1. BoringWorld
    BoringWorld rated it
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    I've never read so much bs, in the space of maybe 5 chapters, in my entire life.

    If you can get past the stupidity of it all, I commend you.

    Simply put, read at your own expense.
  1. cants
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    love the novel is all great but lately started mixing chapters or merging chapters with another novel instead of just updating what over one it is frustrating to read really good spot and get seriously nasty clif hanger

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