Basically a half assed copy of famous novels and manga. School Days, King's Avatar, etc. The MC is a rich "sensible" girl whose only fault is laziness. Yes she was born with a silver spoon that she never forgets to use, no real hardship. It's fine if you never read the originals it references from otherwise it just seems like a lackluster copy. Good for wasting time not good for much else.
The author constantly forget what he wrote in the previous chapter/ paragraph/ sentence. Which is almost hilarious, if the writing wasn't so bad. Also, it's a cultivation novel because the Chinese are physically incapable of writing anything else
I really liked this story, it's interesting, thrilling, and enjoyable.A change of pace from most other novels.Good op story telling very different from normal.I wish this will be picked soon so i can continue reading this amazing novel.
Narration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyThis is my review! Hope you like it! 😉
Although the writing quality is a bit iffy sometimes, the story is very good! The author is also clearly seeking improvement and is improving as the story goes on. Every major character seems their own reasons for their actions and the plot development is exciting! The MC is cold and rational, but he tries to stick to his own beliefs. Overall, this a very good novel, especially for me, who likes action over romance and harems. Hope you keep up the good work author! ~(≧▽≦)/~
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