A Viking's Catch (Book One of the Sogn Series)

In general, your book is on the right track. The character's stories are good and you have created a very interesting atmosphere.

I was the one who bullies people . That's my work . I guess I should help them to do so .

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- Is Daniel's name Emily now? Or is this chapter going to be confusing with the mix of two perspectives narrating the story?

(???) "I'm afraid that I am more than just a children's story. Here, take my arm."

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"Ig-Alima! Sul-Sagana!"Pisau raksasa muncul.

The boy runs into the hut and finds in front of him a wooden table half-crooked, but which is full of his favorite foods made by his precious Aunt Mai.

"Oh no! no need to apologize! Richard and Derek both have been quite helpful with the move in today. Also, I got to meet a few of the brothers as well, so I feel quite welcomed" I say honestly. In reality, even though I don't want to admit it, I feel quite patronized with meeting so many people, especially when all those people are just men.

This Mc is too liberal with information, giving away all his secrets for no gain at all. Not only that but I still haven’t forgotten that mess from last chapter where he gave two powerful abilities to Jasmine for no reason at all. Wanting to see what that goddess that betrayed Jasmines brother wasn’t reason enough. You should also make it so that any abilities he gives to others through the system doesn’t work on him. There’s no reason why he should of been frozen in time last chapter by a power he himself gave to Jasmine. He should also used the powers to he buys for others, might as well make the most of it after wasting the point to buy the powers.

"Yes host."

Hi, cherished writer, I recently read your book and found it to be really fascinating. What tactics did you employ to get it widely read and go viral?