Starting to read this novel...Some of the reviews are okay and some are not but I will try this for the simple fact that it is medically related...The first few chapters are kinda, meh!!!The ex-fiance and her sister were the kind of female that you as a reader would really like to give some major faceslaps...The ML was okay...
This is a good novel. I already read worst one and better one but it’s demarcation his made even if he Inspired from a m han….. the only bad side his that it was said that we would get an atrocious prince but I am to the 110 chapter I think and he is nowhere to be found maybe it will be later so don’t be too fast
You have a lot of points that need to be addressed.1. Edit your work, smaller paragraphs are easier to read.2. Personal speech, the way you currently handle things related to people speaking is very confusing and not reader friendly. Adding personal speech is really easy by marking what was said with "blablabla". Read popular novels and look how they structure interaction of characters.3. Just in the first 2 chapters alone their are so many things wrong with logical thinking and game related stuff. For example, no one stays in a guild just because the guild leader says so, only idiots do that. Or losing all Equipment and having to start from lvl 1 again, players don't have those powers ingame even gm's can't just take your equipment and reset your lvl.There's so much wrong with just the first 2 chapters. Good luck
"So, all the bloodlines you possess will show up here. And those who are present will influence your abilites and future evolutions. Or thats the gist I now get of it."
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