Love love love this book! Love how the story is developing slowly and you never know what's gonna happen next. Excited to see what happens next to mc and his wife and all of their friends!!! Nice job author
This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh feeling.Continue the good work author.
Days passed and finally it was time for the school trip. Daniel was on duty so Martha was the one to take care of the family. As he principal she was to stay at school so she couldn't join the trip. She nagged Jake again for not causing any problems for the staffs on duty and then finally bid her son a safe trip. Jake was excited. They were going to a free and untouched mountain. His adventurer heart was beating fast in anticipation.
Looking around the corner with the knights vision Aldrin can see it is only 2 guards in silver armor with a symbol of two swords crossing each other on their left shoulder.
I rate my book a solid five stars and I'll tell you why. Don't worry, I actually do have an objective reason why.I wrote this book because I was tired of reading urban fantasy wealth building books with no substance and wanted to write one that won't be so painful to read.Most of those books suffer from what I like to call the “deliberate stupidity syndrome” whereby the MC could've gotten a hundred billion dollars by chapter 30 and shown everybody how great he is but the author keeps him dumb just so the story can continue.Any reasonably smart person would have exploited those systems and become billionaires by day 2 or one week at most.I didn't want something like that, so I created a system with a natural limit. Nico (my MC) can't just print money out of nowhere. He has to actually plan and work for it. With no infinite money glitch, we get to see his hard work and cheer for him on the way. The second thing I wanted to curb was “face slapping.” If the wealth building book doesn't have a dumb MC with the deliberate stupidity syndrome, the book will be rife with useless face slapping.These books have no actual plot and use face slapping to pad the stories. I wanted to write an urban wealth building book where the story has an actual plot and goal and doesn't need to rely on face slapping to be good.I hope these points convince you to read my book. I will appreciate it if you read all the free chapters before deciding to drop.Thank you in advance.If you have any questions, you can ask here.
My book is amazing and awesome, why can't you giys just appreciate it by writing a comment, or just add it to your library, I am not shameles for asking this from you, besides, it's not as if I'm asking for power stones. Just push that button, and add my book to your library, or just write a comment, either way. Ethan would really appreciate it. and if your review is good enough, I'll find a way to put your name in the book. limited for one week. so get reviewing.
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