Alright, I usually don't write reviews, but I feel like this piece of c*** novel actually deserves one. I read until chapter 515, so I'm definitely qualified to give this review. My advice, don't read this novel. The author is racist beyond belief and uses skin tone to judge whether a person should be killed or not. And there is so much filler!!! The author uses at least 4 to 5 chapters, which we can just skip as it's not even relevant to the MC or the main plot, to just describe the various worlds and life stories of the people that inhabit them. And worst of all, once the the story reaches a certain point, the author decides to scrap the MCs cultivation and makes him start over for the second time. Almost everything he owned up until now has all been destroyed. In other words, completely wasting 500 chapters worth of our time and SS. I actually felt so cheated when I read up to this point. I read through all that arrogance, racism, filler and double crossing moments to just end up right back at square one. I assure you, I am not amused. All that time spent reading this novel was completely wasted!!!! This is a warning to all the readers, do not be fooled by how well the first few hundred chapters seem as the story's going to take a 180 degree turn.
This book deserves more chapters—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-—-
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first of all im a big fan of the mythology genre ( greek, norse, indian, egyptian mythology etc...) first of all the mc ezra zephyr was naive innocent and ignorant in the beginning, but after his years of training with the wolf of norse fenrir he became cunning, ruthless etc.. and it was beautifully done. the characters developed is clearly to see. not only ezra but also those around him. when you start reading it it's hard to stop there no dumb mc no stupid young manster and all those cliché stuff. little of the world is beaing revealed right cause it's still the beginning of the novel. i did escpect ezra to be a bit more overpowering than how is now. there's a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing major.im not really good at writing reviews but guys this is a hidden gem give it a try and you won't be disappointed.
I know that you're a beginner so good luck!!!I have high hope for this novel 😂😂😂The side chapters you're planning is a good idea DO itTip:Use Grammarly when writing chapters or get a friend to edit your novel or do it yourselfPower!!!Power!!!
The story is good. A space story. But please check again chapter 28 and chapter 30 is the same translation, same title too. But you change the title only not the story. Please post the right chapter first. Thank you.
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