Wow, this story really grabs my attention along with the personalities ofnthe characters and their design. Im very interested in seeing where this going. You have my full suppot shadows finger!!
I read quite a few chapters and the world building is good. No info dump, everything is explained with the story progress. I like novel where the MC has powerful cheats and grows faster. But I personally am not into the novels with alchemy so this novel is not for me. The grammar is little bit bbad. Iam not a native English speaker so that doesn't concern me.So if you like all these things the novel is great.
Woah! I just came here for a review swap, didn't think I'd be interested!Firstly, as an author, I like your writing style alot! It's more detailed than I can ever be.Just a tiny flaw, your sentences are slightly off, structure wise, but it's getting better!Also, this is my favorite genre, so I'm adding this to my library! Thanks!
For the moment gonna leave this as a 4 until theres more, but for now I can safely recommend this. It's a bit too early for a 5 until I see some of the answers behind things like what his system really is and what the other system users are, etc, but im into it so far.
The author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. The story title is quite hooking. Keep on writing and I think you will improve quite fast as your story has the potential and a really good plot. Great job author!!!
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