Jun Hua i want to see you fight side by side with soujin even if you are a girl. I want your army to see you even the f you are a girl you have such power. I hope you will be crowned as queen and soujin as king overall in the five kingdom. You will be the Goddess and God who will watch the five kingdoms to its development Android peacefulness. Then all the people will hail you, knee down before you. When will be this chapter to be such this?.. Please focus now on their victory and courting so as excitement will.not falter. And then, they can be married and jun hua will become the ***iest and prettiest girl in the five kingdoms. Tjen experience being love and true womanhood then bear twin children which are more.powerful that their parents. I hope their children will as good as their parents..
Translation Quality:Some sentences are hard to read because of how they are translated.Stability of Updates:This is one star as I haven't seen how often they will update this story when it goes live.Story Development:The story is developing at a decent quality but the pace seems a bit rushed at times.Character Design: Very few characters are original and the ones that are all seem to be lacking a quality that makes them human.World Background:We all know Warcraft's world background and the author makes a good go at using said background, I would like to know how the author intends to make it their own before I can increase the score.
the story is perfect. it is sad to see it only has 14 chapters though, so I hope the authors would make more!!!the character is good. the world is perfect. I can not ask for any better!!
Great novel. It’s really well written and the lanugage and descriptions are just amazing. Few novels have such an advanced way of writing as this one on the app. Great story. Keep up the good work!
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