A Second Time

This story isn't anything special,if anything is very below average! The MC is to much of a "hero

Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,espero que continue assim

This is a great story. 10/10 If you like magic try this one out.

Very good..... Nice writings...All the Best karthikeya...Hope u succeed in ur life for sure....By ur sister....................Good luck....Achieve more n more in ur lyff...U should get more n more Victoriess...

Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read 😂. are more chapters are coming to this Epic??!

I saw 4 angle there they are seem powerful.

(Tyler)

Hati just sped forwards while following a scent and aura he caught after thinking talking to the old Kira.