To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
This is definitely a hidden gem. Though it has an op protagonist, it uses it in a very good way. Definitely read this if you like a novel with gaming elements and a lazy but powerful protagonist.
The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.
Well, i will say this story is a good one , honestly i thought this wi be boring, because the typical story with strong mc from start is good only at start but wil be bad later. For now let say that this story have a good start and if the author can hold this to the end, this will be a great novel
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This type of novel just isn't for me, it's straight boring, would prefer a normal slice of life at that point.
Sadly, it doesn't get any updated anymore..
It's still an amazing book nonetheless. :)
other that that it is an amazing story.