Read it on Comrademao and it's not that good to be honest, iit's just one of those 'popcorn' novel which focuses on trash lottery system after 100 chapters, MC can also pick bloodline but even though it could sstrengthen him by at lwast 1% he deems them too weak, at some point he find a bloodline at the level of his others bloodline but he forget about it even though he could have a huge backing with it. Ans in the end, even if he had a backing, it would be useless since even toward the middle/end(I stopped at around 360) MC is still at the noob realm even though he has the strength of a god anld could easily go to the Outer World to become stronger faster... There's also the deal with his pets which are totally forgotten after 10 chapters..
Has potential, but the many grammar errors and plot holes get under my skin, especially the grammar, which has mistakes so obvious one has to ask thenselves why it wasnt corrected after all this time.If that puts you off than i cant recommend this one for you, this novel still has its possitives, but i would give it more time so the author corrects the mistakes, untill then its not worth it.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far.
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch.But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
Hi, author, I'm wondering your work is so good and you don't have enough ratings. Hey guys who read this I'm encouraging you to at least dropped a few words to our dear author it helps him motivate more by your ****** words. Fighting author😉
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