A Place For Yellow Birds

I love this book, I do hope you carry on with updates and don't stop please. It's different and I'm very enjoying the read so far

Jake's got it rough: a missing dad, an abusive mother and a hidden talent for baseball which sends his mother off the deep end.  Sent to live with a foster family, his love for baseball is revived, and with their help, will Jake start to shine like the future superstar he is?  This is a really well written story!

I like the author just as much as I like this novel. The MC is great. She thinks before she acts. Even better, there aren't any annoying and overprotecting male characters who wants the MC to be strong just so she can stand by their side, be ruthless and kill everybody. I hope she will grow to become a fighter who will fight with no regards to titles such as little or elder sister, daughter and lover has people around her, loved ones, telling her she doesn't need to fight and that she can stand back. I want her to a have a family and friends who will say " you go girl"The first chapter of this novel made my day. One word: banana

I ate a bag of Doritos while writing this.                                                                                                                                                    N b.         

Please don't abandon the story. I think it has a lot of potential.

anyone know a novel like this? like a very OP MC from the startplease give me a recommendation

Let this quote explain what the book really is "THE WORLD WILL BE MY FARM !!!"."Shiny New Mysterious Super Gem!!!Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!! Moar!!!

I am the author of this story. It is still under development. I would appreciate any constructive criticism. Not mean and nasty but actual advice about the points of review. Thanks! 😊