People nowadays doesn't have any respect the author aren't your slave he have a life and can't always write. Thank for the chapter ! I just read in one go all your story and it's pretty good it's the first time I like a fan fic.
ill give it a 5 star because it has a lot of potential and its really fun, the atory is developing pretty well, the only bad thing is that there are a lot of grammar mistakes, but the story is really good and still can be read
The problem I have, is with the writing style. It is written in novel form, instead of the webnovel form. The story is interesting, I usually do not like female lead stories, but Alex is crafted well (maybe it is because we share the same name lol) anyways...The world building is slow, but understandable and merges well with the story development.I can't say must about the updating stability since, I just started reading it.Also...in another novel, please don't lock chapters to early, and the previous chapter should be suspenseful..Like my review, so that, I can get more points..
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Although undeserving I’ll be shameless and rate this 5 stars. All stories are unedited first drafts so don’t expect too much from this. I thought I would share these as they are my loved creations and the beginning of my writing journey. I don’t ask that you like this nor do I want praise all I ask is that you respect my efforts if you decide to read this.
I loved playing Druid in wow so I am super into this. Loving the story so far! Keep up the amazing work! Sending a few gifts your way ;) Keep the chapters coming!
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