This is not a story. This is a wish fulfillment report of someone who played an MMO and lost so bad that they wrote a report where everything is going well for them. MC is bland af. Meant to only be a blank slate for readers to slot themselves inEverything is reported intellectually monotonous. Even if there are ”human reactions” from the chats, it seems lifeless. Good world building so far though. Chapter 33 and i havent noticed any preset rules being violated yet.
While I have absolutely no idea where this is going, I suggest that readers heed the warning: do read the prologue! Why? Because it's so much fun to read. And the solid worldbuilding just gets better and better to the point where you start to see an almost cinematic quality in the way things are presented - it makes you wonder, what if there was an adaptation? The language hits that sweet spot for me as well. I really hope to see this grow and gain traction.Brb, reading more.
This story is a rare one, unlike werewolves or vampires, this one has goblins.At first the story has made me confused but when i read more chapters, it just makes me want to know more about the first card mage, and what happened to him.A very rare fantasy story, should read more chapters very soon.
While convenient, it had to be mentioned that the language the people of this world spoke was not the same as the ones spoken in Shiro's original world. However, that useless God that had sent her here had conveniently given her the ability to speak the language.
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