I really don’t know why am I reading this, I really thought that the author would become more discriptive of ..... well everything .Right now what I am seeing and reading here is nothing but words on paper, no real feelings behind the words being said or the actions that are happening . I don’t really know if it’ll get better or anything, after all I only read till chapter 8 , but right now all I am seeing is emotionless dialog said by blank faces who we don’t even know who they look like , and chapters that seem to not really have a goal to them just a bunch of jumbled up words together . Nevertheless I’ll keep on reading for the reason that brought all of you guys here, we ain’t got nothing else to read 🤣🤣
its sad but i cant find this book on any illegal sites, this is probably why this book isnt that famous or talked about in various forums & discussion. cause this is actually well done.
I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
Powerful MC with a unique system. There will be slight spoilers and these are the things I’ve gathered from 60 chapters.How is the MC?He seems a little shameless. But that may just be due to the fact that he can get stronger through being as lazy as possible. And he does get pretty strong in comparison to his peers. He’s a little thick-skinned when dealing with other people’s sh*t and has no qualms with doing something that other disapprove of.Story?Can’t go too much into that. But it seems to be progressing at a reasonable pace. Only one major change has happened so far. But I will say that the MC starts in a base with other children and one mysterious caretaker.Concepts?Similar to cultivation, the novel uses “Degree of Taoification” to represent realms, “Primordial Spirit” to represent amount of Qi (?), “Divine Map” to represent a cultivation technique I guess, and “Spark” to represent the energy in the world. The Spark is corrupted and can easily cause normal humans or cultivators to mutate. Those are the basic concepts, I won’t go into further detail.The System?The system allows the MC to generate laziness points by being lazy. He can use these points to increase his Degree of Taoification, Primordial Spirit, and points on his Divine Map. Other than that, the system doesn’t talk much at all.Impressions?I’m looking forward to when I can read more chapters. I’ve read a few of the other trial reads and this one is one of the better ones if not the best. I like the pace the story is progressing at and am enjoying his growth.
I stumbled upon this novelby chance, and I just want to say I'm glad I did! the storyline and characters are amazing! I couldnt put it down. please upload more chapters soon!
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