A Fool's Dream

Hey guys! The story is amazing. Just a glimpse of one chapter just boom! captivated my attention and It seems like I can't  stop reading until the end cos of your good work.. Nice work and keep it up.

Liking the story so far. The author described the realms well and was very vivid in narrating the scenes. Though I am not into fantasy novels, this got me interested.

My only comment so far is the lack of the use of punctuations, particularly a period. Still, it did not affect how the story was told so it's not a big deal.

I am looking forward to this one. I stumbled on to it while browsing comments. I am adding it to my library for now but I will read it when I get time. And I would like to add one thing, It would be better if you could add a few more details to synopsis. So that it will become easy for people to know about the story.
And though I never read about adventure but it will be interesting.

I enjoy reading this one. It had a really nice and interesting plot line. I can see some typographical error but it's okay because It did not mess up with the story. Have a nice day ahead.

i  enjoyed reading this there are a few grammar Error but noting that would stop you from reading it cleary. the fighting scene sound awesome  it very detail . Good job

This is an interesting story that is certainly worth your time. The world building is solid with mechanics and rules that help flesh out the tale. The main MC is a cool guy too.

I did notice a few grammar errors but they don't really break the flow of your reading so it's no big issue. As an action-adventure tale, I give this novel the two-thumbs up and recommend it.

Keep up the good work, author. :)

The premise of the story is depicted clearly. The world building is accordingly, as everything is explained in great detail for the reader.

Sadly, the quality of the grammar is rather poor. I believe this work has the potential to grow into more,  but on the condition that the overall quality improves.

I wish you a lot of fun writing the rest of your story.