The world background of this novel is amazing, good job on that author! I really like how the author explains the world very clearly. Keep up the good work!
I have to admit, I'm hooked. The cultivation system is thought out, very traditional. I like the mc, its more rare to have one instantly op but it's a change of pace. Only complaint i could have is the few grammatical ones, but its nothing unreadable.
Those looking for some fantasy and adventure, then this is for you! The author does a good job in building the world and characters. I'd love to follow their journey more! Keep it up!
The story is fascinating!!! I already added this novel to my library and waiting for the next update. Keep up your excellent work, my friend!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
The story is very interesting story. The scenery and the characters actions is best described. However, punctuations and grammar issues needs to be proofread and be corrected.It's best to find someone to edit it. Keep it up author!
I gave u 5⭐️ for the story and detailing. Im not gonna go through grammar issues and full stops. I know you are aware of it. The story itself was good enough to get 5 stars. Keep writing and I’ll support you
It's a good story for the most part, of course the grammar has room for improvements but that's not a problem at all, I like the main character, but as he is already developed at the beginning it poses the problem of him seeming kind of dull.
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