A Deal Too Far

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Only shooting stars

Akala ba nila, game store ito? Bakit parang naligaw sila sa isang bookstore? Pero, malinaw na nakita nila ang signage sa labas bago sila pumasok. Cyber Game Store ang nakalagay. Wag mong sabihing na-scam sila?

I really love that there is a webnovel that mentions my country nigeria, i highly recommend this book, i can't wait to read more chapters.ni

It’s very good but after 155 I don’t see any 18+ anymore. Did author forget to write 18 at a couple chapters or is there just non after chapter 155?

Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.

I love the emotion and i love the story development pace. You are brewing something nice. i hope to read the story with the same momentum you are creating dear Author!