it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.
I really like it but its scaring me especially Jane sudden turned bad*** I mean freaky. Anyways, writing and storyflow is amazing. All you need to do is maintain a daily update and everything is perfect. Good luck! 👍❤
Hi, author is here!I promise you a intelligent, genius MC. A lot of schemes and merciless killing. There will be R-18 scenes, but not a lot. I will build the World background as the story goes forward. Also, I'm still a beginner. Thus, mistakes are unavoidable sometimes. Bear with me;)Edit: The editing of the previous chapters has began. Big thumbs up to my editor.
Hahahaha. This feels strange reading your own story. The author is ugly and annoying.Main Character is very handsome.Harem Please!!!Upvote for Harem!I want a very big Harem!Low star until Master Rabbink gives easier missions. This Rabbink is too ********.
Please keep updating; how can I get in contact with you, Broyles?I like this translation, and sadly, there are only 19 chapters; I wish one day I could see this book published in English.
"So, hoping that I'm not the most unlucky person on the world, I will obtain one when I evolve? Good to know. Now that all my doubt are cleared I need to think on what to do"
The twelve trainers, thought about it for a moment, and the burly man tossed him a strange smelling key card. "Go, boy. But remember, only a few minutes."
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