I did as I always do and read all the free chapters before making a review.In my opinion, this is an amazing novel with an amazingly rich world-building and interesting characters. The main character isn't overpowered and doesn't have any 'cheat' abilities. Infact beside one advantage he has above most (but not all) he would be considered very average in terms of talent. This slower style of improvement in the mc allows the author to bring out my personal favourite feature of this book, highly interesting world building and side character backgrounds. While I've seen some comments complaining about the story being a bit slow at points I think it isn't a bad trait but infact shows that the author takes his time writing a detailed story instead of trying to pump out more chapters for their own gain. Overall the beginning of this novel at least by my standards can be considered one of the best I've read on this website and I really hope the author keeps up his amazing work!
I'm going to be honest, this is neither good nor bad. On one hand the story development and the world's background was well done (Excluding the translation quality in the episodes above chapter 40), but on the other hand, the character in my opinion had the common sense of typical comedic characters in many comics where he immediately agrees to make any decision, even the dumb or silly ones. Overall, the character development made this novel equal in bad and good things
This novel has so far (chapter 40) had a very fun and interesting look on the overused cliche of the MC returning to the past with almost perfect memory of random events that happened. Personally, I fully love this novel, the characters, and hope that it continues.I hope that this story does NOT become a Hearm and stays a honest and wholesome story about two childhood friend's love.
im not good at reviewing, but here i go. okay, this is a really good read. the MC is very well written, and I love the system in here. I also like how truck-kun was left out, and he's just in the real world with it to help him along. please, anyone reading this, go read the story, you'll like it too.
The rest of the chapters are available for reading on wuxia world or amazon. The mc’s character after the first arc didn’t grow at all and the only enjoyable part for me was the antagonists and schemers until the last 3 volumes where the story improved a lot, especially during the war with the gods.Other than that although the epilogue gave a happy closure to most of the characters at the sacrifice of the protag and left room for another adventure I would've been satisfied if the story gave him a conclusion.
Though, not a fan of idols type of novels, I took my time to read the available chapters of your work. Firstly, the quality of your writing. I think your writing is good. Good grammar, tenses and phrases. Only minor errors which I've pointed out in the comments.Secondly, the rate of updates. This is excellent so far. Thirdly, the nature of your characters. I believe you understand the logic behind character formation and development. Your MC is of great character, even the side characters are all good. Well eritten characters.Fourthly, story line. Right from chapter one, your story is progressing well. From the MC in a new environment to the beginning of his role in his new environment. Steady and focus storyline.And lastly, the world building. Though, I'm not a fan of this world, it's well written. The little of the world I've read is a proof of that.Keep up the good work.
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