Zero-sum game

world building, character development e.t.c is good. But the only problem is author needlessly tried to streach the story as much possible. I will rate the story 3 out of 5. Here is an exampleSpoiler-Look at ch202 he just said same thing colorfully with different words- "that after 1 month he met the condition to evolve the skill which he thought was impossible before 1 month". This single sentence streached to entire chp.

Well, I am a fan of Cultivation novels; So, I just got struck into it as I saw its genre♥️To be honest- The plot the novel bears has great potential and intriguity😍I think the novel gets more and more love from the readers-and, kindly re-visit and re-edit your initial Chapters for errors✌️You may find some more ideas while reading them again!

you really need to be sent to jail. sometimes I wonder if mature people write stories in this web novel

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then invisible dragon fell in to more dispair cuz colbob

"You don't have your little boyfriend to protect you now do you"

"If only the others are online" lamented Luke. He knew that the other guildmates of his were still working in their respective jobs in real life.

"What are you gonna do, big fella?" He sneered.