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  1. Code43
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    I twitch and groaned as I slowly woke up.
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    Cultivating quickly wasn't always the best way to approach things. Sometimes, creating a quality foundation was important too. As Robert had told William before, in qi condensation stage, it was imperative that disciples didn't just expand their sea of qi but also learn how to control it to a finer degree.
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    Hi I’m new here. I’m just trying to create a novel. Read and support to help keep the fire burning.🔥🔥☄️
  1. MRUKNOWN2
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    This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me!Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!

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