XFallen Angelx

@ chapter 69This story has enchanted me, everything about it. The MC doesn't seem op at all and instead just seems to be ****** an amazing foundation through hard work.

me bad at words but this good ..........

The grammar is little bit off but what the heck!! Its one hell of a story. I loved it. Please keep translating......  I like the way both the mc and his best friend James got their man. It would be cherry on top of the ml could be more rough I mean to the enemies he he he. Please translate faster in the future please...... it would be nice if there would villian or third party interested in  mc Liam. You know he is so cute and adorable. A man of status like the ml who can put some taste and charm in the love story.

Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3.  Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop.   4.  Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable.  5.   You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one.   6.   So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7.   Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8.   Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel 🙏

As he fell in he was frantically trying to climb himself back up, but he was scared! He didnt know how to swim and he silently had climbed up and back down the water. he wasnt flailing his arms around and yelling because he could not make a sound. He needed to save his breath to breath.

Da Vinci - So, you're going to give them to your wives right away?

I ask Veronica

[Lily: Why do you hate it when people got hurt?]