World Shift

I'm loving this. I hope Damien and Sierra have a happy after.

Yeah it's me shameless rating five stars.                                                                                                      

An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults.Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes.The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update.Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.

The story's good but a book cover would be nice. Plus, based on one of the chapters, the Marques guy likes her right? So if they were to be a couple later, why isn't it mentioned there? Or perhaps will we have a new male lead as well?

"Bayu..papa punya sesuatu.." kata seorang lelaki.

" Ikaw ba ang magiging bagong kasambahay ?" unang beses na narinig nya ang boses ni Nicholas .

He saw every tiny detail of her movement.

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