World Of The Mysteries

Firstly, the concept of the novel seems intriguing and full of potential. The idea of exploring a world where humans have evolved due to a catastrophic event and the juxtaposition of advanced technology and human greed is a captivating premise that could attract readers.Secondly, the main character's journey of self-discovery and redemption through his second chance at life could make for a compelling story. The mystery surrounding his return and the world he finds himself in creates an engaging plot that could keep readers hooked.Finally, my advice would be to focus on creating well-developed characters and an immersive setting that transports readers to this futuristic world. Consider exploring themes of human nature, morality, and the consequences of our actions, which could add depth and meaning to the story.Overall, keep writing and exploring the possibilities of this unique and exciting world you have created. 👍

Her most attractive attributes were those pair of eyes, which held a sense of indifference along with a bit of confidence.

A halberd slashed through the air, while a flexible whip blocked the only escape route. A frown appeared on the man's face.

he was getting ready to start getting more energy again so he summoned his shadow to keep Lookout while he gathered energy The Shadow appear from behind him walked a little towards the front of the cave. Ezekiel set down towards the back of the cave to get ready to start the Gathering energy again this time though he spent another hundred EXP in order to unlock his second energy point.

Not that I wasn't charmed at some point, but after knowing other sides of her you'd be numb to her charisma at some point. Well, it was for me anyways.

after roaming around the streets , Mike walk along the road.... as he was moving, he found a man who was injured badly., blood can be all over him... blood stream can be seen flowing down his face, mike turn him around and see his face....

"Ralton pack, I will pay you back in your own coin." she crawled into the stream and when she was deep enough, she dived in and swam towards the stream bed.

-BAAAANG-

"And do you know about Vishnu's avatars in the human realm?" to which Karna was about to say something but was interrupted by an agitated Shani.

   Then he turned. "Lysa, I think I knew what killed my mother."

Hello everyone, Author here. This would be my first time to actually write a something so I want to thank those who wanted to read and those who had already gone through the current chapters. I'm not shameless enough to give my own writing a 5 star rating but I of course it still being a bit shameless giving this rating. Well, it's my own written story after all.As a newbie author I know that there is a lot that I needed to improve at but I guarantee that my concept in creating the whole background of the story to be quite interesting. Anyways, I would appreciate if you guys leave reviews or even criticize me for errors on my writing and things I needed to improve on.Again, thank you and have a nice read.

just what i was waiting for, finally I can have something fun to read , and I hope this lasts longer then your previous once